Okay

This one was okay, not the best. There was so much more you could have done here but you stuck with just text and yellow, which is fine, but it seems a bit messy. Your other works had themes and understanding to go along with it, but this one seems more like an experiment to try something and I don't think it really worked. You do still have a great talent for font and text work. You always know where to place your fonts and make it really catch your eyes properly, but this one here needed a bit more and I think you can do so much more with these pieces of work you do, so it was okay and keep it up.

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This one here well it needs more work, more something, it just seemed a bit off to me.

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