Better

This one here is very much like your last "ROCK VS" drawing but this one is much better, the elimination of all those black lines and giving more details into the effects and things in the middle was a good thing you did to improve this piece. I do think you could still make this bigger in quality and size as it is a nice concept. The effects are still not here but you used details with your lines to create some nice textures and detailing. Overall a nice piece of art and more improved upon your last one, so always good when you come back to things and tweak them.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better than the last similar one but still needs to be bigger and have more effects inside it

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I think that I like this version more than the one with the writings being black! You have a cool style of drawing, sketchy and messy, yet neat - every line seems to have its right place. Great illustration of an amazing idea, gave me a chuckle! :D

All caught up again on your Inktober contributions #1-30 (I guess there's 1 to go?). Some scary monsters, some variations and some free-flowing thoughts from the looks of it :D Good times! To answer your thoughts too on #29 vs #30, I like #30 better, though admittedly it's very subtle. I think think the use of just the yellow and red in the background, vs the black and grey for the rock/weight gives more separation and a cooler contrast :D Really cool organic "noise" too with the random little brushstrokes. Really liking this one :D Great job!