awsome

its great i hope you keep up with the art.

nice

fix the blurriness and it will be a solid ten

needs work :D

The character is good but it looks like it should be in a flash movie not the art portal.
The moon, pumpkin and guy don't fit together at all.

You've just used an image of the moon.
The red dots or whatever they are meant to be don't have any point and get in the way of the character.
With the text you've just drawn it really messily and used the blur tool when really it you want it to seem blood like you should actually put more effort into it.
The pumpkin is terrible doesn't seem like you've tried very hard to make it good.

I'm Liking This

yes, yes, it's going well. I can see improvement in your work.
very nice job.
I love the moon and it's glow. same with the jack-o-lantern.

As for a tip for improvement, Add a background and ground plane, after that use the glow from the moon to cast a mincing shadow from old Vampy there.
If you do go for a background, keep the colors simple and washed out, is ir will keep the focus on the old neck biter there.

exellent

nice job its really epic