Ooka (early version) by Dooffrie on Newgrounds

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Ooka (early version)

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XwaynecoltX

2018-01-13 05:00:50

Very nice work

Now you have some really nice work here the amount of detail put in here is really amazing the muscles show off very well the colors come off very well as well a nice character and the backround was ok but for me I would change up the background with some deep texture maybe some city scene in the backround kind of like he just got out of battle or something but you could draw some sort of pattern and design that reflects off the character even throwing in some lighting effects on it as well but anyways very nice work here and glad I came across this piece it was pretty decent stuff and hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A backround pattern or design with some light effect hitting off if it

~X~

Cyberdevil

2016-10-01 06:09:52

His toes really look like fingers, a bit too long... if they're not intended to be that way? Interesting squiggly style of line work otherwise, feels unbalanced but powerful.

-cd-

Dooffrie responds:

Looking back on this I really don't care for it honestly. I like the dynamic pose, but I agree, some of the anatomy is off. I've definitely improved since then. Thanks!