I like the perspective a lot. For some reason it makes the scene feel like it was taken out of an action movie or that action bit of a drama. The killer's face seems very intense and almost scary.

But the image seems a bit too blurry. I'm not sure why exactly, maybe the paper texture or how it was scanned or something. I'm also not really a fan with the scenery. You're unique style with them is evident and for some reason seems to work well whenever you put them into a drawing, but static objects like the buildings in the background aren't as good. The alley walls are alright but the buildings in the background need some work.

I'm starting to become a fan of your stick people going on with their lives.