Fantastic cell shading and wonderful hands! Hands are so difficult to do and you did a phenomenal job. I really enjoy the flow of this piece, very good rhythm going on. My advice to you would to be to watch the size of the heads on the characters, the male characters' heads are looking just slightly too big for their bodies. You've got some good dynamic poses going on so the piece doesn't seem so two dimensional. All in all a wonderful job, thanks for sharing!