Good composition, with a good focal point. I think the wings need a tad bit more fine work. I love the bridge and how it is faint in the fog. Good use of saturated colors. keep it up!
PS:I feel like a jerk since i cant draw anywhere near this good and yet im trying to provide feedback.
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Illustration Friday 7 - City
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BIRD BIRD BIRD BIRD BIRD!!!
HenLP responds:
No, no. The feedback is greatly appreciated, especially on this assignment. If I'm being forced to participate in the Illustration Friday thing every week, might as well know what I did wrong or what I did right.
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