the lens flare is pretty, but it seems like you don't know much about perspectives or human anatomy. the head is seriously messed up. i know you are doing this one to work on lighting, but just some of the stuff like the curtain pole just hanging there, muffled colors, poor anatomy (even for manga), and awkward perspectives make this kind of average.
(you did the lighting fairly well however)
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immaboreddude responds:
actualy in a medicine estudent and studying human anatomy but In this piece I only pay atention to the lightning interaction with diferent tipes of objects thats way is a lightning practice . but good observation :)
and yeah i kinda mess up with the face .
nice. but the legs r to big 0.0
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niiiice, said to say but shes a "butter face"
I love it :], I don't know if it's just me but the legs and head proportions seem a bit wonky.
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