apart from the anatomy issues and stuff, you need to really work on those lines, they are suuuuuper wabbely, also idk what pen u using but you might wana get something that gives a bit more control on the thickness of the lines.
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apart from the anatomy issues and stuff, you need to really work on those lines, they are suuuuuper wabbely, also idk what pen u using but you might wana get something that gives a bit more control on the thickness of the lines.
i'm using unipen 01, 03, and 05 but i still don't quite understand line weight.
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