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another older model
give some comments folks. I need the critique!

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I will cut myself!

Whohoho, this is so bad!
-Textures
-Relfections
-Materials, basicly
-The art in the scene
-Background...

It's not worth even reviewing! Please, it's torture for my eyes!
Try fixing:
-Shadows
-Reflections (Shells look transparent as GetAwkward said)
-Materials (Bullets look like they have no material, try increasing reflection amount a bit)
-Textures UNREALISTIC!
-Background, do you see it? Neither do I.

Kinsei responds:

uh-oh.... someone is butt-hurt.
Tisk tisk, so petty.

EXCELLENT

The mirroring is perfect. There's no need to contrast with the table, because should you do this, you loose out on the mirroring effect on the wood grain. Excellent job. 10/10

Kinsei responds:

I think with some more contrast it would bring out the reflections even more.

Well

Your color contrasting made the shells look transparent. If the table was black, and the wall was red or something, then this would look better.

Kinsei responds:

I used a refract setting with the reflection, which I think made it transparent. but a little contrast would probably be a good idea.
thanks

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Uploaded
Jul 16, 2009
11:45 PM EDT
Category
3D Art

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