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Pure Light(SjälTale) - LapisTheWolf

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LapisTheWolf responds:

Its not frisk.

You did a nice job with the background again, and I love the various designs of Lapis's outfit that I've seen you use. I do, however, have a few nitpicks about the execution of drawing the characters.

Unfortunately, Ink Sans kind of looks like he's about to fall over. I'm not sure how I'd recommend fixing that in the future - perhaps draw a vertical line where his body is supposed to go before you start drawing him? Also, for the area between Lapis's arms and chest, there should be a curve connecting the two (armpit area). (It took me a bit of time as I learned over the years to figure that out myself!) In general, it seems a bit like her shoulders are too broad in comparison to the rest of her, or the rest of her is too thin in comparison to the shoulders. Once again, I recommend paying close attention to reference images to figure out things like this.

Despite these minor things, this picture has a lovely atmosphere, and I greatly enjoy your work! Honestly, if you were to work on being more consistent with proportions and positions in the future, it would instantly look a lot better, because you've already got shading and a lot of other things figured out really well! Happy early new year, and keep drawing! :D

LapisTheWolf responds:

Thank you so much! I'll start using the refrences to fix the posture and the arm things going XD

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