PPL who played true pacifist: I had worse (cool art)

This is so much better than most Undertale fanart on Deviantart.

Still A Better Love Story Than DeviantArt.

wow,thats nice art and animation,i must say!

Even though the lines are drawn by you originally, this picture feels very superfluous and unoriginal from the perspective of the viewer. Try bringing new life to the image. Not rehash something players of the game have seen already. Also, add some more frames to the animation. It seems very choppy when fluid motion would fit it better. Stay determined though and keep creating!