it is cool with the technology and the character looks good but her holograms are very odly blurry and take up so much space and feel aggressive, i believe how they aren't even that tranparent is why they feel so cluttered
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An illustration for the Jazza contest, which I almost forgot to do.
Here's my proces - https://sta.sh/01ex4a6hooo4
Thank you <3
The style is pretty nice, and the character design sure does work for this. So does the facial expression. The little eye she has as a necklace is a neat detail.
There's a problem with her left arm though. It seems like it's bent in a really weird way and kinda elongated.
Thsi was a neat little piece. Not mind-blowing, but neat. Be careful with the anatomic details though.
Margrise responds:
Thank you so much! I experimented with my style a little. And thanks for pointing it out, I tend to have problems with anatomy sometimes.
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