that 4th wallbreak had me dying
all pages from this comic: https://www.newgrounds.com/playlists/view/8c7b40a538f517087b7d020557e40a42
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Kind of a messy comic.
Hope the joke at the end works without spelling out that there are no panels during timeskips >_>
Was tricky to brainstorm a mundane antagonist that could quickly get under her skin. Tattoo lady turned out cute I think. The goons were quite fun to draw - I feel like the text helmet trope ought to work especially well in comics since it's basically diegetic speech bubbles. Other media can struggle to implement text without messing up the pacing.
that 4th wallbreak had me dying
God though, your fourth wall breaks work so got dang good though. The blade in panel 3 of the last page just hit so beautifully
and the girls just like "the hell just happened?"
Damn, she killed Cr1TiKaL
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