It's okay.
Your biggest problem here is proportions. I suggest you look up some facial proportions tutorials. Also, the shoulders on the woman in front are too broad. Either that or the head's too small.
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It's okay.
Your biggest problem here is proportions. I suggest you look up some facial proportions tutorials. Also, the shoulders on the woman in front are too broad. Either that or the head's too small.
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