(I know its late but i just saw your thread asking for reviews so) I really the character design and the background is nice and simple however I also think that the view you see it from is a little static and straightforward, like a platform game? I think if you changed the angle you see her from (maybe zoom closer to her face and focus on her and one wolf, with the other two further in the background) then you could add more detail, because she seems diminished being so far away. But overall very nice and I love the sliced wolf :)
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I sincerely apologize for uploading this picture twice. Long story short, I changed the original picture, but couldn't edit it on Newgrounds. " You have already uploaded this image" or some shit like that.
So here it is, hopefully improved. Tell me what you think. Thanks!
Also, Thank you @kgbm for the feedback!
min3ralWater responds:
Thank you! It's never too late to write a review. I always appreciate criticism. The reason I made that thread was because I thought I had gotten the anatomy wrong (witch I had been practising very much so I was sad to see the low rating), but I'm glad that wasn't the case. Views and angels aren't that hard to learn, I guess. When working with a cartoonish art style it's sometimes hard to get the detail right without making it look too "messy", so I still have to improve that. I'm sorry for making this so long but long reviews need long responses. Again, thank you most sincerely for helping me, and I will take your feedback on board for my future projects :)
Rule 63 Geralt?
That's what it reminds me of. Very nice though.
min3ralWater responds:
Haha, Siri is actually kind of a male version of Geralt. She even has the scar and everything. Thanks for the review, glad you liked it!
I like the detail of the clothing and it's amenities, the leather belt and the chain like decration look very nice.
min3ralWater responds:
Thank you! I'm glad liked it.
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