Giggity :]

I love her boobs

She got nice panties

:)

you show potential, but your perspective is all over the place and there is a lot of things wrong with this i don't know where to start... so lets just talk about the good things...

The hair is nicely portrayed in a stylistic way with good tones (although could use with some deeper shading) and the eyes are nice as well....

if you want to try to improve i highly suggest you come over to the new grounds art forum and start a personal improvement/art thread

The vanishing point for the girl doesn't match the vanishing point for the bed. If you look at the elbow and hips where they touch the bed, they are right next to each other. At the same time the observer is also looking down the chest. I recommend drawing a block person (I'm sure you've done perspective with simple shapes like buildings, yes?) and use it as a guide as you draw in the person.