The best inspiration involves text and low-res old stuff :). I approve.

As someone who fails to create necks accurately myself -- can I suggest? I think you needed to show more neck here. Such a strange comment for such an image. But I feel this would land better if the character was looking towards me, showing some neck / face / etc ;).

If this advice is not useful, discard it. I feel this image is both disturbing, and wonderful at the same time. An incredibly difficult balance to strike! I'm glad you avoided wild gore / etc and focused on showing only the parts you felt reasonable. I would suggest converting this sort of material into a "painting" with blending brushes. As strong as your line work is, I think a softer rendering would have helped the painting, and line work, land.

(I am terrible at lines and have no business suggesting this, just suggests, lol)...

Very very cool, the old version has more movement or a have more clearer pose than this but other than that I like the coloring the texture and the wires at the BG.

Do you think that corpse knows where his daughter is?