darilhowell
knda cool i guess
darilhowell
knda cool i guess
Sharp and Acute.
The atmosphere generated by the image is quite empowering. You've refined this through effort and it looks clear and wholesome. I particularly like the the fact that you've included a second fundamental (the blue planet) in the image and this compliments it wonderful, and actually looks better.
What I really adore in this picture are the stars. They have great variation in contrast and brightness and look realistic. You've also given the dust an immersing blue aura and they look like shining floating sapphires.
My minor criticisms are mainly about the circumference of the white planet. Because the exterior is so sharp they look like bladed edges instead of fading horizons. Also the details on it need to cover the entire planet, even in the shadows. Another thing is that the yellow explosion looks very obscure and abstract. It's hard to tell when it is impact in progress or the insides of the planet after some collision.
It's not perfect, but you've submitted a deep and powerful space orchestration that has details, visuals and expansive ideas. The execution is professional and the result is very decent; i'm impressed.
I'm glad you like the piece and have taken the time to write your review,
The white planet needs alot of adjustment but with helpful comments like yours i'm sure i'll be able to finish it to a point where most people are happy.
I'm glad you picked up on the blue planet, it took alot of effort to get that right as it originally started out as brown/orange until i realised that the colours contrasted too much between the two planets.
Thanks once again for your constructive criticism and words of encouragement, it's people like you that keep me at it :)
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