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Ahh, class doodles. I love doing them...but yours are far more detailed :P

It's definitely random, but I like the amount of variety you did put in there. You could have gone a more cohesive route and drawn things related to eachother, but it's nice how you have all these oddities on a page, like the train and the cat and the eyeball...thing xD. And despite the fact it's just doodling, you do have a lot of detail in there as well, which is pretty cool. Some of the things you drew freehand are things I'd be interested to see developed and maybe made into drawings of their own, because you've got a whole group of pretty whimsical ideas, and the fact this is all done on a biro shows the amount of potential you really have, so really nice work yet again.

If you go back to this, I think adding more colour to it would be an improvement. And 'cause of the craziness of it, you really could go all out on the vibrancy with the colours and really make it psychadelic. But for a single-colour classroom doodle, this is really nicely done. Keep it up, as always.

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Random, AGAIN?!?!

I really love your random things, I can't understand it too much, but I think they're really funny and creative. I loved the drawing style and the color, it fitted really well to the random concept, it was very cool, I really liked it.

The way the drawings connect each other is great, but I just think it'd be greater if you add more colors into it, since the blue is awesome, but it needs the help of other colors, because the pic seems too blank just with the white and blue, I think you could work in the colors, Facundo (lol), it'd look way better...

The drawing was pretty cool, very random and funny, but I felt something was missing, you have potential to make more, that's what I expect... Keep it up (no more Facundo little jokes... lol)

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NG Sketchbook tour?

Seriously, with a piece looking like this when you've drawn it in pen on some lined paper during a school lesson, I think that you're showing great potential. Obviously, you would need to spend some time developing the drawing like this on proper sketch paper, with pencils and perhaps even a splash of colour, to bring it to life.

With pieces like this, the abstract nature of the piece does tend to leap out of the page, showing that there is a bit of clutter around, which could lead to something being plucked from the relative obscurity of this doodle sheet and in turn being developed into "the bigger picture", so to speak.

As you progress to pencils, feel free to let your wrist become a little more loose, allowing for more expansive strokes, which will in turn let the piece develop better. It is all a part of the learning curve, but you have what looks like the energy and the passion to do this, so good luck.

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Looks good

Haha, just before I read your description I thought "This looks like someone would draw in class when it's boring".

Even though you used only one pen to draw all this you added quite a lot of details to the picutre.

It's also nice that one discovers new things all the time the longer you look at the picture. I especially liked the "Crazy Train" in the bottom right corner. :)

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I think this looks like something I would draw when I get drunk but I didn't realize that this was notebook paper until I saw the bottom because the whole paper was pretty much covered but I think you did a really nice job with this whole thing really.

I couldn't really tell what most of the stuff was but that is creative I guess but there's not much bad things to say about this since it was because you were just bored as crap but try not to spam the art portal with just doodles because trust me, it happened to me but I think I am exaggerating since this is your only kind of doodling piece but yeah, nice work on this. Well there's not much to say about this really so I will just go onto the overall score.

Well I thought this was well drawn and trust me, I do this too but you do it better than me but I can't really review that you didn't color it because you only had one pen but good piece but don't always take may word for it because I always review things generously.

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