I like to think her bow is the battery pack, you've done well with the lighting even though I feel the piece might benifit from a more bladerunner bleed effect.


I feel as though this critique may not come in use as the style could possibly be trying to represent this, but the mechanical pieces seem to clash with the concept of soft bubbly shape of the feminine figure. The arms being in separate segments breaks up the round portions of the physique while still getting the sleek and sexy feel across. Even the chest piece works as a large single segment with emphasis on its detailed curvature still makes sense as a combination of metallic assembly and human form. But the legs, put simply the legs are too luscious.


They slightly make it look like all she has nothing past the knees, although I may just be seeing that to overexposure of the image. The reflection of the face truly makes them feel round, but the "assembly of the parts" just doesn't sit right, the rest of her looks like robot pieces but the legs look like a nice pair of skin tight leggings on a plump pair of legs. I bet you went through a good amount of reference images for that pose and you extracted too much.


Other than that theres not much to fret, the arms are posed wonderfully and they are set to keep the eyes moving around the image instead of just being stuck staring at the round parts. The hand on the ground sort of looks like a mop, but I blame the roundness of the lines crafting the middle finger, not your lighting work. And the interworkings within her stomach could use some additional darkening lines as the other portions of her interior really pop with those highlights, I think a more intricate portion like the center of her body could contrast well with some depth added with shadows.


Good work, I bet she serves a mighty hot coffee.