Very nice
So what can I say that I have not already as this was very good love the larger frames in this one and as for the actual comic you bring a certain element about it that really thrusts the story forward and showing the detail in the artwork with great shades and detail and even the textures of some areas that really standout and I like the results you are a talented artist and I'm glad you made this and showed us some nice art details now as for improvments I'm not sure as you have covered alot and already thinking outside the box I know I would love to see more tid bits of color not all of it but just a piece here and there a hat a TV etc kinda like you did in one of your other comics
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some tid bits of color on props or just some random item
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