(you asked for criticism) besides the eye..maybe the shadow under the chin in comparison to the shadow in the collarbone-region was what you felt as off to you? also the shadow/rendering on the side of the face with the lazy eye feels a bit off, but maybe you did that for the contrast and it was intentionally so i don't know. but i like the approach of - "someting feels off here..." - "screw it! i just need moar sparkles!" xD inspiring..i need more sparkles too. keep up the good work!
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Finally finished this off, i spent quite abit on this drawing to see what was off, but i couldn't find anything, so i just put a bunch of sparkles on it and called it a day, any critism would be awesome, if not enjoy the art!~
Ortani responds:
Hey, thank you for your criticism! The right eye was actually intentional, I was going for a crossed-eyed kind of look, and everything felt kinda okay to me except the right eye shape/size compared to the one on the left, not the position of the pupil itself. And also the hair, I was rendering it for hours and kept changing it with no satisfaction, so I got sick of it and as I said just put sparkles on it to finally finish it, also yes now that I look at the lighting on the right side of the chin it is too much and could have toned it down a bit, thank you again XD
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