First of all, I think you should probably darken/blur the people in the background to make it easier to see the characters that you want to focus on.
Secondly, try to remove the vertical lines before you begin to draw.
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First of all, I think you should probably darken/blur the people in the background to make it easier to see the characters that you want to focus on.
Secondly, try to remove the vertical lines before you begin to draw.
Yes, I forgot about this detail of people, I made this drawing in 2017, but thanks for the tip. Those vertical lines are from the notebook, there was no way to remove.
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