This is a good start for something like a comic. Not too bad. The face seems to lack some detail though which could really bring it home that last night was a real blow out for little foo-foo there. The half hearted grimace helps. Throw some scruff around the head and or jaw line and this would be a definite 'aww, F##K it's monday' pose. Might consider a cigarrette or coffee. Hell rabbits might drink more java than one thinks.
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rough warm up before animating for the day.
Bunnies have to get ready for the day too.
Pelboy responds:
Thanks so much for the thoughtful reply, if I return to this I'll try everything you said :) I only spend half an hour on these things each morning to warm up, so they usually lack in areas other than colour and light. I'm trying to get better at prioritizing.
nice looking character!
Awesome pcolor pallet and expression !!
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