I can feel golden age comic vibes from this style. Infact, if you told me this was a screenshot of an old comic
or dnd expansion book I'd believe you. A trap a lot of hobbyists fall into is over complicating their line work making it hard to read at times, but nothing can be mistaken in this piece from a glance. Honestly I dont know what else to critique, the lighting looks great, gives great depth and I dont know if its intentional but i like that the color of the rock is reflecting off her skin just under her leg. People often forget light bounces and it makes the subject really feel like a part of the scene. Great work!