i think the smoke and hair to lesser extent in this one looks a little flat; it might look better if there was some outlining of the clumps that make it up instead of just shading. but great lineweight and posing as always.
phoooooooooooo
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Pistolewe responds:
I get what you're saying about the smoke, I'd probably go back and redo it if I could since I could've probably found a better way to illustrate it, but me personally I really like how the hair came out and I must not understand what you mean by "outlining the clumps that make it up instead of just shading" since I did outline the larger shapes of her hair and added shading to it. Thank you for the feedback!
Edit: just realized when you talk about the "clumps" you're probably referring to the smoke. That makes way more sense good god my reading comprehension skills are terrible I'm sorry LMFAO
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