employee of the week by pointlessfield on Newgrounds

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DevilRat

2021-01-23 22:18:27

Neat use of perspective, but caution, try to avoid over detailing and spots of being no detail, because... Though for someone on the very PG side. The least detailed spot is the butt, and boobs. I am going to assume unintentional due to PM EXCLUSIVE stuff from a few months back. Try working on faces more and more... As it feels like it's stuck in-between two art styles. Between tonal bodies and begineer anime look, but the shading. The perspective maybe wonky, and may have to take into a count of proportions. Still nice.

There maybe a slightly perverse side to this art, but I am not blaming you... It's the only spots that aren't overly detailed, think of detail as a hiearchy, to keep it balanced, some areas can have mass detail, some areas lack there of, and some just enough detail to not over crowd, but not overly simple.

pointlessfield responds:

woo,good to see some more critiques from you
in this armor's case,the butt and boobs are more sexualized then detailed for some story reasons (gonna take me a lonnggg while 'till i get to her story though),could be my horny side showing but ahwell,no one's a saint in that regard
terms of faces,those anime faces have a special place in my heart,i love having them even if it dosn't look professional, but i can see where you're coming from if it doesn't blend well with my body structures.

im not keen enough with detail hierarchy though (honestly i havn't heard much about it),i might have to see how it works a bit more.