Childish
This is a very childish piece, and not like...Pablo Picasso drawing like a child, but a 9 year old taking 2 minutes to draw a christmas card for his dad piece. The lines are messy, a complete lack of effort in this drawing, no signs of shading at all, just badly done fills and a bad perspective on the boxes under the tree. Snow does not fall in perfect circles like you are portraying either, please at least put some effort into your work before you publish it.