I love your recreated version of the official character profile. It seems it is an improved version of this drawing. You drew Shyna and her parasites to have a pointier and jagged style with shapes of squares and triangles. The aggravating expression on Shyna's face is priceless. You give her more emotion and you gave her a more functional pose that expresses more of her frustration. The parasites are trying to get her attention. This is cute, but you can tell she's not having it today.
It's too bad that games like this are often forgotten for the bigger mainstream games. It is known when it comes to Treasure games only a few people will remember them. And they have short stories. They are more like arcade-style games. They don't too much care about those stories. They just want it to be a fun, straight-to-point game.