It looks great

The contrast between the nicely detailed backgrounds and the relatively simple character designs is such a good way to balance the piece. I guess that technique shows up in a lot of animation and other works but I still love the way you apply it, makes your slice of life stuff more alive than other things I see. I love in this piece how you manage to imply the interior of the store with just a few lines, while all of the detailed ads on the windows are eye catching but not overbearing. Nice job dude!