Hey white girl. Me? You want me to come down there and fuck your pretty ass? Well I'd love to!!

For a project rated E this is perfect. What I mean is, it is clearly not for Erotic value if it is rated for everyone.

You have a very nice touch. I love her eyes and how her tassels fall. I would have given her cat lips..I don't know why when I look at her I feel she is going in that direction..do you remember the cat-lips? https://k36.kn3.net/taringa/2/1/0/7/9/8/61/regendropfen/169.gif?1665

You did well not to I guess, I suppose 'cat-lips,' would have given the piece that erotic flavor you were seeking to avoid.

Eh, could've been done a bit better. Face looks very off-set and weird. Even a bit mal-formed. Also, shading is a bit weird in two ways. It seems to go in two directions. One direction going pointed up. And the other direction going diagonally down to the left.

Also, shading things is usually a good way to subconsciously tell the viewer, "hey this part isn't important." Which is pretty important to get right when you draw things of erotic value. So shading off most of her ass, just brings attention to her back(which looks good, but not extremely appealing.) and shoulders. Other than that it looks nice. Even though the shading is drawn in two directions, it's drawn well.