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Eva

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DragonPunch

2010-11-28 16:52:37

Unfortunately not that great.

I'm sorry for being honest. Let me just get that clear, before you flame me for making a review. I really don't find anything really great about this piece. It's good, not great, which can be disappointing, and it is. You definitely have potential, and please, oh please, I beg of you DO NOT WASTE YOUR TALENT ON COCK JOKES! Everyone else does them, and it's really annoying. Anyway, never mind that moot point, the shading and lighting could definitely use some improvement (I'm hardly better myself, but hey), and I would like it if you added more clarity to the rain to make it pop with the picture better. Just some tips. I really hope you take my advice and not act like an immature butt hurt little girl. Can you do me just that one teensy little favor? Because, I'm tired of everyone flaming me for being honest.

SirCannabisClock responds:

lol I ain't mad bro, there's too many fags that can't take constructive criticism.

However I'd like to add you need to write your reviews with a little more clarity. Shading and lighting is all I retained from the jargon, and even so I thought "exactly what areas did you feel were off?"