Cool

So this was cool I like her groovy style the hair is really cute maybe you should think about adding some shine in the hair and also maybe some background detail like a disco ball since she is dancing it's just a small idea but might work well but overall a good drawing you have here anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background work and shine

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Now this is different, because it isn't a character from an already established work. It's from something you made. I guess I'm just not used to you drawing characters like that. This girl just doesn't seem as attractive as hotter characters like Starfire. I will, however, give you credit for wanting to do something different. The colors and tints work out pretty well here.

I like how each and every part of her body seems to be a different color. Her eyelids, eyelashes, and lips are all a different color. You have some pretty good detail in the hands too. I like how delicate they look. She reminds me of Pippi Longstocking.