2 bears by theguylearningART on Newgrounds

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2 bears

Two bears doing high fives.

Give me ideas for more posts ill include that you gave me the idea. mix animals together or things together or whatever. tell me like 3 items to mix and make a blend of into one creature and i will attempt it. i need the practice.

DONE BY HAND. had to take a picture cuz i don't have scanner big enough for that whole thing.

Follow me and watch as i get better at art and improve my skill. it should be interesting.

im still new btw.

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Kinsei

2010-11-19 11:04:08

good start

It really is.

Problems:
The number one thing I have to ask is; Is it suppose to be on it's side like that?
If it is then I think it would look better in portrait layout.
The secoint thing I need to address has little to do with the art its self and more about your presentation... again.... The lighting seems dark go to the Art101 account and read this; http://art101.newgrounds.com/news/post/314936 it will help you with taking better photographs of your paintings.
Continuing with the critique is the bears could use a little more definition. The two of them tend to blend a bit.

Good:
The lack of a full background in this seems to work this time. The background has a simple but abstract appeal to the painting.
the composition has a good feel to it.

over all, a couple of changes to the presentation would do some wonders.
Keep practicing. As I told you earlier, drop by the Art Forum for some more critique and exposure.
5/10