I can see why people didn't like this as much as your other pics. I am one of those people. I think the main flaw was that you didn't have a lot of organization. Normally, ommitting the black lines is a good thing, but I think in this case you would have benefited from it. I don't know what those silhouettes are supposed to be in the lower right hand corner. I don't know what's going on.
The best thing is probably the ship. It looks like it's decaying as it's flying away. It seems like it could even be a spaceship which I guess would make some sense in the sky. I don't know what that gust on the right is. I can see some red shape, maybe another Clock?