Fat guy is fat

Overall quality of this picture looks a bit bad, as if the quality of the image was reduced due to scanning or converting. But when I viewed it in full size I couldn't find anything that would indicate why the image looks so "blurry" to me... maybe I just need some glasses? -.-

Aynway, the facial expression of the guy looks pretty good. It is as if he was acting in a commercial and he holds the chocolate up to the camera and says something like "Buy this!".
I think his stomach could look a bit fatter. Right now it only seems as if his shirt is a bit too small.

I also like how the sun puffes out its cheeks, as if to mock the fat guy. Nice detail there.

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alrighty then

you really should make your art a little different.You other pieces are ok but these kind I don't really care for.

-The Guy-
I like the chocolate around his mouth that shows that he was eating it(half a point).The hair looks ok ,no points for it though cause it is to high up so it looks like a wig.I love his facial expression how it has that fat guy look in his eye(1 point).Hes has a big shadow so it shows that he is fat but his body looks kinda skinny so not half a point of a point(fourth of a point).Shirt plain and all it has is Food written oddly on it(8th of a point).I like the chocolate in his hand and it looks detailed a little(half a point) but his arm holding it looksvery.....retarded.The belly sticking out of his shirt doesn't add up.All it is is it looks like the shirt is to tight(8th a point).Pants and shoes very plain.(half a point)
Total points from "The Guy"-3

-Background-
The grass looks very nice,you really tried hard on the grass and it looks real nice(1 and half points)Clouds look better than the last art you made like this"Mr. Molocule"(1 point).The sun looks fat which pairs up nicely(1 and half points).Sky is all right plain so no points.I liked the back ground a lot more than the person for some reason.Im a sucker for a good background.
Total points for "Background"-4

-Improvements-
The background was pretty plain so make it more detailed and interesting.A more detailed background and I probably would of gave you a 10.But I did like it more than the person.So I would recommend drawing him better next time.You draw great though.And make it more 3d.This piece it looks like you tried to purposely make him 2d with no 3demension.Also add some layer effects next time to.

Your other art looks real nice.I recommended you and if you were scouted I would favorite your art.And its this art I do not like not your other art

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Funny!

Your style is just too cute.

As with your other larger pictures, with a background and a character, you've used one colours as a base, which seems to be the blue sky-colour. I like the way you outline everything, the prominent black lines are really good with your style.

I also still like your colouring, the way you not only fill it all in, but also do it sloppily, making it look sort-of childish. I like it.

The character could've been fatter, right now it just seems like he's wearing small clothes. The sun is funny, looking like it just took a piece of the chocolate. It also looks a bit more sloppy than usual.

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Fatty McGee

-This definitely tickled my funny bone just a little. Not because he is fat but that he is wearing a shirt a couple of sizes too small with the word "Food" on it. It's just a little ironic that a shirt like that would be too small. It must mean that he is a lot fatter than I can tell.

-It also looks like he is feeding the sun some of the chocolate bar because he is holding his arm out and the sun's cheeks look like he has food in his mouth. Just a couple of things that I noticed.

-Still could use some work on the coloring but the lines look smoother in this picture than in some of the previous ones where they are squiggly. But this is one of the better pictures overall.

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funy

but not as good as the other