I really enjoy the linework of this piece, it is simpler but it builds up to make this more complex image.

I also like the pink hue and the way you did the hair and gems, very smooth and nice.

My only critique of the piece might just be that you can really see where you were trying to cover an area with marker to fill it in.

I think you could fix that by making the clothing of items more simple in shading so that it is made of blocks of color than transitioning colors.

You could still get shading, but you would need less space to fill up an area.

Hope to see you improve more and more as time goes on!