Sorry it took me so long to comment on this....

First he wants perfect women you only see in fantasies and then he wants you to do a more natural looking pic. You can't have both! Anyway, trolling aside, this's a pretty good pic and there is actually one noticeable thing wrong with it. The chick with the red hair's left arm is either too short or her right arm is too long. Not by too much, just a bit. As far as with the former's gripes, nothing else is wrong with this work. The colors and contrasts are great. I wish I had an eye for coloring like you do but I won't get into all of that. Maybe we should do some collabo work together one day! I'm pretty sure we could come up with something that's truly fudging awesome! Nice work Zet!

Cool.

This is epic. Tons of detail and awesome color choices. Hope that this is done again sometime.

Pretty F***ing Awesome!

I love how it ties into one of your former drawings, the Moon Ritual, and how the succubus looks like the girl in that pic, only possessed by an evil spirit. And the statues in the background help tie the connection with that.
The only problem I have with this pic is the proportions seem a bit off like with the hand on the statues and the hand of Azalambel are a bit too big. But that's understandable with the crazy perspective you got going there. 10/10 from me.

Pespective!

The perspective is powerful and strange. As a whole, it's great! The shading is wonderful and the colors work well, but I have some little criticisms to point out to you;
-The succubus' torso seems too short and her frontmost thigh is too thin.
-The statues' hands are too big; same applies to Azalambel.
-Why does the tiling end abruptly on the floor?
Otherwise, it's awesome. Keep it up.