Turned out Nicely

But some how, the leads you used seem not to fit right...

Nice melody

i really liked the melody. not much to improve on. it was repetitive but sort of in a good way. many different synths

a song that makes me wanna party it up!

Well put together my friend! Oh, and thanks for the review on the voice loop LOL.

Kinda thin

First of all, thanks for your reviews! :D
On to your stuff, now...

I like the bass sound, but it just was too repetitive. Try changing the chord progression up every so often, it keeps people on their toes.
You know what you need? Some swooshing background pads. The whole song is kinda thin, and the one pad I DO hear just doesn't cut it.
Your drums are too straight and predictable. Throw in some crazy drum loops, slice them up, and rearrange them! :D Also, there's a synth that pops in a couple times that's WAY too loud in the mix. Turn it down plz D:

It has potential, it's just those little things all adding up that bring it down. Keep working at it, read what other people are doing, and I recommend picking up a copy of Comupter Music magazine. It's chock full of advice, free synths/effects, and free samples! I learned a lot from it. :)

- Rig

Replying

You only had one song :-( I was expecting to make a couple of reply reviews.

Anyway, this is a pretty good start, keep it up.