Pretty good but you have some clipping through some certain parts..

ballin

this is the first song of yours i ever heard. this song is inspirational, and does sound like some kinda commercial, which is a good thing.

oh man

i have to agree with drizzle. sounds like cable co. or phone co. commercial music. but its kinda cool. in a get-a-vote kinda way.

thats good

it sounds like somthing from a tv commercial