One of my first songs i have ever made... plz dont laugh too hard! lol
Good.
The beginning progressed well, however the song was to long for what little ups and downs you had. Also not enough likable rhythms to make it want to be listened to again. So added all up. good work but to repetitive keep it up get better.
zexi,
lol i still listen to it once in a while. its the first song that i submitted to Newgrounds, and also one of the first songs i have ever made. all the rest b4 this... were only short songs for practise lol
thx for the review :D
The first, yet the best.
I loved this one! I don't think you used Garageband for this one. I haven't made any similiar songs as this one, but I do have some. Try listening to mine and tell me what you think. =P
looong...
it was a good first effort :) - although it started a little slow for my liking, it was good, if a little repetetive at the start. It sounds like the kind of thing you would have in the background of a "how to..." show on youtube.
ya i know its long... i didnt notice the length until after i uploaded it into newgrounds... lol o well.
Good Job
For your first time, it was good. Keep trying and you will get much better. Good Luck in the future!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
ElectroLord99 
