Hummm!

Pretty good... get rid of the flute, add violin or strings instead... i like the piano, makes it really effective!

keep it up

Review for the composotion mainly...

It has a japanese mood, and the title would be complete as "Tomorow will be a blacker day, so lets live today to the fullest". Consider leveling the flute a bit, and adding some reverb. I would also advise you to use different soundfonts/synth plugin/buy new keyboards whatever.

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The flute is too oppressive for me, my heart is beating faster than before I began to listen to your music. Oh man! BTW it's interesting, there's a little japanese mood in it and that's cool!