Nice job!

I like the psychic feel going on here, keep it up!

And be sure to check out my stuff, thanks!

dooooooood

it's good stuff man good stuff. add some drums! it would be so much cooler with a solid beat. give it a try

Has potential

But there's really nothing molding this song together--it sounds disorganized becuase there's no real melody, no bassline, and a lack of percussion. That weird slidy synth you display throughout the song would make a great foundation synth for a full-sounding techno song though.

So I definitely suggest adding more to this, it has a lot of potential, and so do you. Keep it up man. :)

Randomness...

This song is really random, but has a few good sounds in it. You should focus more on a solidified tune.

Maybe my stuff can help, check it out some time if you like.