Quite nice

Here's your main problem, I think: the sound quality stinks. That's probably a big part of the reason why the score was 1.90 with 5 votes (although judging by the score of my own recent submission, many people who browse the classical section don't actually like classical music, or perhaps they just vote 0 to strike down competitors). Anyway, if you want, you can send me the MIDI file and I'll try to create an mp3 that actually sounds a little more listenable. :)

As for the piece, it seems pretty nice to me. Some fairly nice harmonies, good melodies, good development. I thought there could've been a bit fewer dissonances in the first half, but that's personal taste. ;p