I really enjoy the groove this track has! I don't know how much control you have over velocities in famitracker, but I definitely think the hi hat pattern could have used some humanization to help compliment it's relationship with the pluck lead and bass.
I have to applaud your utilization of the stereo field! Some chiptune tracks sound flat and mono, but you've spaced out your elements so they have the breathing room they need! The arps and harmonies sounded nice! Listening to the old version, this is quite a step up!
Finally, while I enjoyed the energy this track has, I feel like it needed some variation. The key change about 1:30 in was done really well, but I wish there was something to break up the two halves.
A cute little ditty with great energy!
2.5/5