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I could totally use this for a fight scene

Hello! This is a review for the NGUAC competition.

I've gone over one or two general categories of issues specific to your song, and one section of things I think also deserve complimenting. I prefer being very direct with my critique, none of it is meant to offend. Thank you for your understanding!

Constructive Criticism:

- This track really needs a bit... more to it. At the moment, it's a 24-second loop that does not loop cleanly. There isn't really enough to even comment on the arrangement.

- That guitar is having some fun noodling, but it should probably at least follow the chord progression laid out by the bass. Around the exact middle, it starts going into dissonant notes that don't seem to fit the existing scale being used or the base chords that the bass implies.

Compliments to the Composer:

- Decent sound effects in the first half, decent drums in the second half. Guitar provides some nice ambiance and the acoustic quality is decent. Bass is a bit loud but perfectly alright. Just not much to work with.

Final score: 2

Noice

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Score
3.73 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 2, 2021
9:45 PM EDT
File Info
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937.5 KB
24 sec

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