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The first original song I ever made. Figured it was worth uploading on NG, hope you enjoy!
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Very nice!
Love the melancholy in the melody. Beat is chill, waiting for the song to evolve.........it seems not to evolve much but the tune is catchy enough so that I don't overly mind. Wait, a new synth comes in late in the song. It sounds nice, albeit a bit subdued. The end is quasi-abrupt, I feel like the piece is beautiful but never comes to a full actualization. Great melody writing though. I just can see this going to much higher places. But that's the beauty of music, you can always come back to this piece to improve on it. I've revisited some of my works 4-5 times over the course of a decade. This one's special, definitely come back to it at some point. Cheers, -|Glenn 4/5
Thank you very much for the kind words and constructive criticism! I didn't notice it ended that abruptly so I fixed it, thanks for pointing it out. You made a lot of valid points and I'll definitely keep your words in mind.
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