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S1LENT GHO5T - Take 2

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My submission for the Knock-Out round of NGUAC 2021.


The song is named after the fact that I never made it past the start of every competition I entered, I didn't remember making it to the Knock-Out round in 2020 until literally a year later. I lost that round as well.


However, now that I made it again in the present day, I can try again. Like a 2nd take. Hence the name, "Take 2". Except this time I'll actually remember.


The lyrics in the song are also meant to encourage others who did or didn't make it further into NGUAC or any other competition.


You'll get another chance, and when you do, give it all you've got!


I'll also be releasing the instrumental version which you can find here in case you don't like the vocal version:

S1LENT GHO5T - Take 2 (Instrumental)


Hope you enjoy what I've spent a grand total of 24:46...


That's more than half the time spent on my song "Two", just as a fun fact.


Lyrics:


[Verse A - 1]

Play again

And again


Until it finally sounds right


Levels

High and low


Tweaking and making it better


Playback

Again


Something is still missing


Playing with combinations

Trying to make it sound amazing


[Verse A - 2]

I have another chance

Give what I have ‘til the end


All inside my head

One big, pretty mess


Mixing

Some math


Something real nice to hear


And now’s the time to bring it to life

And hope for the best one more time


[Chorus A - 1]

Win or lose

I’m not afraid to try!

Don’t care how much time

Or the takes!


I don’t need to try and validate

Who I am or what I do!


Maybe it’s different for you.

Just do your best!


And if you don’t succeed, just try again

One take or two, always improve!


[Chorus A - 2]

You don’t have to be the best.

It’s not all a contest,


Just have fun and do what you love


And when the time comes,

show what you got!


Give the world of taste

Of the magic that you make


Adventures of the mind

Something new


The play’s done

It’s time for Take 2!


[Verse B - 1]

Mix again

And again


Fixing and touching up each sound


Controls

High and low


Making sure that it all stands out


Delayed

Reverbed

Compressing all the hardpoints


Typing and lucky guessing

Trying to make sound less messy


[Verse B - 2]

No matter where I stand

I’ll give it all that I can


Up against the clock

Making sure this rocks


Keep on

Going


The finish line’s ahead

And I’m heading at full speed


Ready to go after the lead!


[Chorus B - 1]

Win or lose

I’m not afraid to try!

Don’t care how much time

Or the takes!


I don’t need to try and validate

Who I am or what I do!


Maybe it’s different for you.

Just do your best!


And if you don’t succeed, just try again

One take or two, always improve!


[Chorus B - 2]

You don’t have to be the best.

It’s not all a contest,


Just have fun and do what you love


And when the time comes,

show what you got!


Give the world of taste

Of the magic that you make


Adventures of the mind

Something new


The play’s done

It’s time for Take 2!


[Outro Chorus]

You don’t have to be the best.

It’s not all a contest,


Just have fun and do what you love


And when the time comes,

show what you got!


Give the world of taste

Of the magic that you make


Adventures of the mind

Something new


The play’s done

It’s time for Take 2!

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I like the upbeat piano riff at the beginning. The melodies struggle to come through the mix a bit once the harmonies come in at :20, but I’m enjoying the build-up into :41. I’m not a huge fan of vocoders, admittedly - it’s really hard to make them sound natural/articulate. That said, the vocals are mixed well, and the texture fills out nicely around them. The chord progression is a bit generic, along with some of the sound design (lead synth, piano, and some of the drum samples, for example). The piece is smooth-flowing and well-structured. I enjoyed the melodies too, although towards the end they could’ve used some more variety, especially during a relatively long piece. Overall, my main problem with the piece is the lack of originality in the harmonic structure, arrangement, and instrumentation. The production quality, transitions, and mood help make up for that, though, and the lyrics and rhythmic content are also really nice here. Keep at it, LordJabeebus! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
2/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.5/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
8/10

Sounds great! Best of luck with the competition. Even though we're competitors in the grand scheme of things, I still hope do well!

LJTLegendaryL responds:

Thanks! Best of luck to you as well!

Credits & Info

Listens
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Faves:
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Votes
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Score
4.35 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 24, 2021
9:22 PM EDT
Genre
Dance
File Info
Song
6.8 MB
4 min 59 sec

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