heh

i enjoyed that :D

great job

obviously everyone else missed the point to music like this. i really like it, perfect back ground noise, play it quietly whilst surfing the net, perfect music for doing so

I agree with G-vegas

You need to provide more points for progression. You may not necessarily change the chord patterns; you can also change textures, much like the progressions you did after the 3-minute mark.

Try this little experiment... add, remove or replace one element every four measures. Also try making a certain instrument appear only once in eight measures. ^_^

And, sorry for saying this, but it's still repetitive even as background music.

Hope this helps! Keep makin' music! ^_^ Pass by my page if you have time.

I think that you should know...

That this song is entirely too long. It got repetitive fast. After about 2.5 minutes i had to skip forward to see if there was any difference in the song; there wasn't. However, i can see that you worked very hard on this, and I want you to continue to create more music. I would also like for you to check my stuff out too, and give an honest opinion. 4/5